老耿为你点评：回复甘当小学生之1-3
<div style="text-align: center;"><b style="background-color: white; "><font size="5">老耿为你点评：回复甘当小学生之1-3</font></b></div><span style="background-color: white;"><br></span><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; "><strong style="background-color: white;">学员朋友们：</strong></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 晚上好。我是长安老耿。今晚我为大家点评一个同学的文章。这位同学的网名叫“甘当小学生”，学号247。他写了一篇题为《</b><b>国土资源系统行政权力运行监督制约机制的构建》的文章，让我提点意见。为此，我于6.19至24日三次回复，相互沟通交流。在此，我就以这三次回复为线索，对这篇文章予以点评。</b><b>不妥之处，请甘当小学生和在座的学员朋友们批评指正。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></b> <b>这篇文章在老秘网学院群的论坛里，大家找到了吧。好，请朋友们一边看文章，我一边点评。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p align="left" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">复甘当小学生：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 你好！谢谢你的信任。好的地方就不说了，这里只挑挑刺：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></b> <b>一、文体不妥，内容混乱，层次不分明。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></b> <b>《</b><b>国土资源系统行政权力运行监督制约机制的构建》，从文章标题看，本文好像是一篇论文。本文文体，既像是论文，又像是调查报告，又像是工作汇报、经验介绍，结果是四不像。从内容、层次上看，通观全文，有些混乱：既有构建权力运行监督制约机制的实践与做法，又有针对某些问题的思考即解决问题的对策。同时，其些问题又没有明确指出，对策也不够系统。这样，就把实践做法、存在的问题、解决问题的对策，这三部分混在一起了。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 建议把全文分为上述三部分，分别论述。标题也要做相应修改。比如可改为：构建国土资源系统权力运行监督制约机制的实践与思考。实践是第一部分，“思考”包括了“二、存在的问题、三、对策”两部分。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 二、本文的开头两段，也体现了上述问题。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 1</b><b>、文章开头，就像包包子，皮要薄，一口咬着馅。你的包子皮太厚，而且是两层皮。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2</b><b>、论文类文章的开头，应该是主题、内容的概述，也应该能体现出全文的层次、结构。也就是你撰写本文的思路。可能由于你下笔前，没有在脑子里想清楚，思路没理顺，腹稿没打好，便急于成文，结果没有很好的做到这些。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 人常说，纲举目张，文章开头，就像“纲”的头。这个“纲”的头，抓对了、抓准了，才能做到纲举目张，才能撒网入水，网到大鱼。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 可改为：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 构建国土资源系统权力运行监督制约机制，是</b><b>深入推进国土系统党风廉政建设的一个重大课题。</b><b>**</b><b>市国土资源局在这方面进行了有益的探索，取得了初步成效。同时在改革实践中，也发现了一些体制、机制方面的问题急待解决。本文拟就上述方面做一简要论述。不妥之处，请批评指正。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 三、再说“纲举目张”。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 这个“纲”，就是腹稿成熟后，落在纸上的提纲。提纲，有“纲”有“目”。有文章标题，有正文一、二、三级标题。也叫大、小标题。也可叫总论点、分论点等等。这些你一定知道。我就不罗嗦了。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 从文章看，你的文字基本功还行。</b><b>我不了解你及你单位的情况，上述建议，仅供参考。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">握手。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr>长安老耿</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2014.6.19</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">再复甘当小学生：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 很高兴看到修改稿。相比初稿要好多了。我原来建议正文分为实践、问题、对策三部分。担心有二：一是不知道是否符合你单位的实际，二是不知是否有相应的材料支撑。(其实，我当时还有一个担心，那就是：即使相应的材料支撑，不知道甘当小学生同学他能不能驾驭得了，有没有那样的驾驭能力。不过我当时没说，怕挫伤了他的积极性。现在看来，我这第三个担心是过虑了)看到修改稿分为问题、对策两部分，我心里才踏实了。看来你是把实践中的做法融入到了对策里了。其实，你的初稿就是这么做的。只是我当时没有体会到。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 建议：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 一、对策之六内容此较丰富，包括1、2两条。相对来讲，其它各项对策的内容显得单薄了些，不知能否充实一些内容。如果，其它各项对策没有内容充实，是否可以把对策之六一分为二。这样，可以使得各个对策在篇幅上相称一些。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 二、建议你把酝酿、构思、起草初稿的思路和修改稿的修改思路，整理成文，于自己是总结提高。这也是我多年的做法。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 三、如果方便的话，本周六(21日)晚上我值班，我讲课时是否可以把你的初稿、修改稿与学员们做个交流分享。(备注：由于YY语音的使用问题，21日晚上未能讲成。)</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr>长安老耿</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; 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background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr>《成文过程》收到。从中看到了你的刻苦学习精神，更看到了你的进步。重读《实践与思考》，再提出以下建议：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"></font></b></p>**** Hidden Message *****<p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; 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word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; "> <wbr></font></b></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2014.6.24</font></b></p><p align="left" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; 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