领导讲话稿怎样写出“美感”
<section data-role="outer" label="Powered by 135editor.com" style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); line-height: 25.6px; font-family: 微软雅黑; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><section class="" data-tools="135编辑器" data-id="86005" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><section class="" style="margin-bottom: 16px; padding: 16px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; word-wrap: normal; overflow: auto; font-size: 15px; line-height: 1.45; border-radius: 3px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(247, 247, 247);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一篇成功的领导讲话稿,美感是很重要的一个方面。这里,笔者结合工作中所见、所干、所思,就领导讲话稿的美感谈点体会。</span></p></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; 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max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; color: inherit;"><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在思想启迪人</span></strong></span></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -1em; margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: -5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: inherit; border-top-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(33, 33, 34); border-right-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-right-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"><section style="margin-top: -6px; margin-right: -6px; margin-left: -6px; padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-radius: 100%; line-height: 1; display: inline-block; height: 14px; width: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); float: right; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 8px; height: 8px; border-radius: 50%; background-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"></section></section><section class="" style="margin-top: 18px; margin-right: 10px; margin-left: 10px; padding: 6px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; line-height: 1.5em; background-color: rgb(235, 235, 236);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">站位要“高”。</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">高,是高瞻远瞩、高屋建瓴。“不谋全局者,不足以谋一域;不谋万世者,不足以谋一时。”站位高,就是要紧紧围绕讲话的主题,从历史的、辩证的、全局的角度去认识、分析、解决问题。比如,2012年11月29日,习近平总书记在参观“复兴之路”展览时发表的重要讲话,既回首过去,又审视现在,更展望未来,体现出一种“高远”之美。</span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">理论要“深”。</span></strong>深,是深邃、深刻,不是深不可测、晦涩难懂。理论深,有利于体现思想,引人深入思考。理论要深,就要紧紧结合学习、工作、生活进行深入研究,从而得出具有深刻内涵、独到见解的论述。像“为人民服务”“发展才是硬道理”“既仰望星空,又脚踏实地”等,虽寥寥数语,却寓意深长、意境深远,让人听了会去回味、思考。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">语言要“新”。</span></strong>新,是新颖、新鲜。语言新,有利于传播思想。语言要新,就要多讲自己思考后得出的新话,少讲他人讲过的老话。2010年,习近平总书记针对长、假、空的不良文风,明确提出要“短、实、新”,强调新意既包括角度新、材料新、语言表达新的话,又包括富有个性、特色鲜明、生动活泼的话。由此可见,优秀的领导讲话稿,不仅要有新思想,而且要有新语言。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; 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color: inherit;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><em class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“美”</em></span></section></section><section style="margin-left: 0.2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; color: inherit;"><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在表达感染人</span></strong></span></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -1em; margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: -5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: inherit; border-top-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(33, 33, 34); border-right-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-right-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"><section style="margin-top: -6px; margin-right: -6px; margin-left: -6px; padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-radius: 100%; line-height: 1; display: inline-block; height: 14px; width: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); float: right; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 8px; height: 8px; border-radius: 50%; background-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"></section></section><section class="" style="margin-top: 18px; margin-right: 10px; margin-left: 10px; padding: 6px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; line-height: 1.5em; background-color: rgb(235, 235, 236);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">比喻要“切”。</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">切,就是贴切。恰当的比喻,可以增强领导讲话的具体性、生动性、鲜明性,以更好表达对事物的感情和态度。2016年3月10日,习近平总书记在参加十二届全国人大四次会议青海代表团审议时强调,“一定要生态保护优先,扎扎实实推进生态环境保护,像保护眼睛一样保护生态环境,像对待生命一样对待生态环境”。这两个比喻生动形象、非常贴切,充分体现了保护生态的重要性,引人深思、使人警醒。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">排比要“强”。</span></strong>好的排比句,因结构整齐、节奏鲜明,具有吸引人的美感;因逻辑严密、说理透彻,具有说服人的美感;因抒情强烈、表意酣畅,具有感染人的美感。1942年2月8日,毛泽东在延安干部会上演讲《反对党八股》时指出:“它们不是生动活泼的东西,而是死硬的东西了;不是前进的东西,而是后退的东西了;不是革命的东西,而是阻碍革命的东西了。”2013年2月6日,习近平总书记同党外人士共迎新春时说:“对中国共产党而言,要容得下尖锐批评,做到有则改之、无则加勉;对党外人士而言,要敢于讲真话,敢于讲逆耳之言,真实反映群众心声,做到知无不言、言无不尽。”这两处均用排比,把问题说得非常透彻。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">引用要“好”。</strong></span>在领导讲话稿中恰到好处地引用名言、警句、典故等作为论据,可以更好地表明观点,增强说服力、感召力。习近平总书记在参观“复兴之路”展览时发表的重要讲话中,说到“中华民族的昨天”,引用了“雄关漫道真如铁”;说到“中华民族的今天”,引用了“人间正道是沧桑”;说到“中华民族的明天”,引用了“长风破浪会有时”,让人感到“气场”强大,气势不凡。2016年1月12日,习近平总书记在十八届中央纪委第六次全会上的讲话引用了不少典故,包括“锄一害而众苗成,刑一恶而万民悦”“新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿”“不能胜寸心,安能胜苍穹”,等等,既言简意赅、寓理深刻,又深入浅出、娓娓道来,体现出深厚的文化底蕴。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 14px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -1.8em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; height: 40px; color: inherit;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; height: 40px; width: 100px; float: left; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: rgb(33, 33, 34); border-left-width: 1px; 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max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: inherit; display: inline-block; font-size: 4em; line-height: 0.6em; vertical-align: top; text-align: inherit; text-decoration: inherit;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: inherit;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><em class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“美”</em></span></section></section><section style="margin-left: 0.2em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; display: inline-block; color: inherit;"><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p class="" data-brushtype="text" style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; line-height: 1.4; font-size: 18px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">在形式吸引人</span></strong></span></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -1em; margin-right: 8px; margin-bottom: -5px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; color: inherit; border-top-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(33, 33, 34); border-right-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-right-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"><section style="margin-top: -6px; margin-right: -6px; margin-left: -6px; padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-radius: 100%; line-height: 1; display: inline-block; height: 14px; width: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); float: right; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 8px; height: 8px; border-radius: 50%; background-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"></section></section><section class="" style="margin-top: 18px; margin-right: 10px; margin-left: 10px; padding: 6px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; line-height: 1.5em; background-color: rgb(235, 235, 236);"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">标题要“活”。</span></strong><span style="max-width: 100%; line-height: 25.6px; white-space: pre-wrap; box-sizing: border-box !important;">“看书先看皮,看报先看题。” 标题要“活”,就要做到准确、鲜明、简洁。首先,“活”在概括主题。1943年11月29日,毛泽东在中共中央招待陕甘宁边区劳动英雄大会上的讲话,标题是《组织起来》,讲话开篇就说:“我想讲的意思,拿几个字来概括,就是‘组织起来’。”标题《组织起来》概括了讲话的主题思想和基本观点。其次,“活”在表达观点。1982年1月13日,邓小平在中央政治局讨论中央机构精简问题会议上的讲话标题是《精简机构是一场革命》,直接、干脆、响亮地表明了整个讲话的核心观点,可谓一语中的。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">结构要“匀”。</span></strong>匀,指匀称。著名美学家王朝闻先生曾说:“结构之于创作,如同作战部署之于战斗一样,是决定成败的一个关键。”一个人身材要协调,领导讲话稿的结构也要做到均衡、匀称。一般而言,作为结构的重要部分,二级标题、三级标题,在确保能引领、概括所属内容的前提下,应尽量做到句式、层级大致相近,这样可以使语言整饬,标题之间互为补充、相互映衬,呈现出较强的形式美和表现力。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(227, 108, 9); box-sizing: border-box !important;">字数要“近”。</span></strong>领导讲话稿每个部分、每个层次之间,如果能做到字数大体相近,就尽量做到;不能做到,也不宜相差太多,否则会给人失衡的感觉。它体现秘书人员的谋篇布局能力、文字表达功底。某段文字多了,可以压缩例子、精简修饰词语;某段文字少了,可以增加例子、典故、修饰文字等,以达到总体平衡。当然,要坚持的一个原则是,形式要为内容服务,任何时候,都要以内容为根本。追求形式美,归根结底是为了精准地表达领导讲话意图。</p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: inherit; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; font-size: 14px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></span><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section><section style="margin-top: -1.8em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; height: 40px; color: inherit;"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; height: 40px; width: 100px; float: left; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: rgb(33, 33, 34); border-left-width: 1px; border-left-style: solid; color: inherit;"></section></section><section style="margin-top: -8px; margin-left: -6px; padding: 3px; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border-radius: 100%; line-height: 1; display: inline-block; height: 14px; width: 14px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); float: left; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254);"><section style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; width: 8px; height: 8px; border-radius: 50%; background-color: rgb(33, 33, 34);"></section></section></section></section><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section data-role="paragraph" class="" style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; border: 0px none;"><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); white-space: pre-wrap; font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 1.6; box-sizing: border-box !important;">(文章摘自《秘书工作》杂志2016年第10期。原题目:《领导讲话稿的美感》;作者:李勇)</span></p></section></section><p></p>
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