你发现文章下面的那条逻辑线了吗？
<p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">有一年，全国平安建设工作会议在某省召开，会议安排该省在会上介绍该省平安建设的先进经验。平安建设工作涉及到的工作方面很多，怎么样简明有序地把相关工作说清楚呢，写手们构思时的逻辑是这样的：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">首先，任何工作要做好，都必须要先有准确的定位和设计，在思想认识上要得到足够的重视。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">其次，就是要告诉大家具体抓平安建设有哪些措施、办法，在便于别的地方学习借鉴。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">第三，如何建立长效机制，把取得的好的效果巩固下来、使相关工作得到深化。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 28px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">这里边，包含着开展工作的一个完整的流程和必经的程序，而这个事理逻辑就是行文的主线。最后会上的讲话，其结构和提纲如下：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">一、牢记第一责任，在“两个率先”全局中谋划平安建设</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">二、注重综合治理，统筹推进平安建设</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">三、健全长效机制，为实现长治久安提供保障</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 56px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">很多时候，为了更能条理清楚、简明有序的说清事理，写手需要找到所表达内容内在的逻辑关系，并作为文章的行文线索体现出来，从而使文章从大的结构开始就体现出言之有序的要求。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">下面，是一位市委书记的讲话，代表新一届常委班子向大家作承诺：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">同志们：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">刚才，市委九届一次全会选举产生了新一届市委常委和书记、副书记，通过了市纪委九届一次全会的选举结果。在此，我代表新一届市委常委会，对各位委员的信任表示衷心感谢！下面，我代表九届市委常委会，向全市党员干部、向全市人民群众作出四点承诺：</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">第一，我们一定虚心学习，不当庸官……</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">第二，我们一定拼命干事，不当懒官……</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">第三，我们一定精诚团结，不当斗官……</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">第四， 我们一定清廉为政，不当贪官……</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 37px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"> </span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">这四点“承诺”的顺序为什么这么摆呢，把这顺序打乱一下可以不呢？其实，这里面就涉及到一个内在的事理逻辑关系：新班子上台要履行好职责，第一重要的就是要加强学习，只有通过学习，才能够进一步提高各方面的素质能力以胜任新的领导工作；领导就得干事，干事就是谋发展，能力素质提高之后，当然接下来就是要发挥领导作用干出好的业绩；既然是代表班子表态作承诺，班子就要讲团结求合力，于是第三点说团结；领导干部既要干事，更要干净，于是第四点作出廉政承诺。整个内容顺序的安排，其实都隐含着一条内在的事理逻辑的线索，写文章找到了这条事理逻辑线索，文章就会浑然天成，有力有序。</span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, 'Hiragino Sans GB', 'Microsoft YaHei', Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 25.6px; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br></span></p><p style="max-width: 100%; clear: both; min-height: 1em; text-indent: 47px; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important; line-height: 25.6px;"><font color="#3e3e3e" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, Arial, sans-serif"> 文/胡国权 首发：老秘有话说</font></span></p><p></p> 好文章，需要细细的品味，尤其对我这种新手来说！ 仔细品读，对于我这个新手来说，真是受益匪浅
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